tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post3864187890008060260..comments2024-03-01T03:13:20.172-05:00Comments on Poetic Notions: Cool Night Drifting Gwen Dubeauhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02762368919548287749noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-26081063025049033522012-10-11T23:19:11.835-04:002012-10-11T23:19:11.835-04:00this one does twist... the "blood on the floo...this one does twist... the "blood on the floor" lines took me a little aback-- i like that in a poem! :) joannahttp://the-tenth-muse.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-44028345485213210392012-10-10T05:52:59.215-04:002012-10-10T05:52:59.215-04:00Interesting piece - things do twist and turn - you...Interesting piece - things do twist and turn - you say it wellmarousiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12925164210601407878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-35407514566938656462012-10-09T20:46:38.887-04:002012-10-09T20:46:38.887-04:00Oh, it's never just one thing, a straight line...Oh, it's never just one thing, a straight line is it? I particularly like S3, "Dirt on my face, shows more than a trace, like lust or smooth lace." Good one.Other Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-5014937227364980332012-10-09T20:25:28.749-04:002012-10-09T20:25:28.749-04:00I like how this went in a direction I wasn't e...I like how this went in a direction I wasn't expecting. And loved the lines,<br /><br />I crack open my heart, <br />gears forced to turn.<br /><br />So much is said right there... I could really feel your angst... well done.Serenahttp://www.serenahelriot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-26513784741388175592012-10-09T20:09:34.017-04:002012-10-09T20:09:34.017-04:00Lovely write Gwen. The sounds the textures the wor...Lovely write Gwen. The sounds the textures the word ryhthmic -- a super read. --our fatal loveJoan Barrett Robertshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08078385285085867796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-45277048534873598152012-10-09T19:26:52.990-04:002012-10-09T19:26:52.990-04:00This reads fast...quick the way a mind might fight...This reads fast...quick the way a mind might fighting sleep and yearning for someone, something unattainable. Very effective.Beachannyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08638256396472533685noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-79592343967759033002012-10-09T18:55:18.516-04:002012-10-09T18:55:18.516-04:00yes, i love the way this turns on itself at the en...yes, i love the way this turns on itself at the end... wonderful!mrs mediocrityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01021079985184737831noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-1162558434189587092012-10-09T14:15:28.555-04:002012-10-09T14:15:28.555-04:00Dream of love, write about love, fall in love agai...Dream of love, write about love, fall in love again, Gwen. You inspire me this morning.emmett wheatfallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07466994239329611740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-83992832934015671112012-10-09T11:06:17.062-04:002012-10-09T11:06:17.062-04:00pleasure and pain do tend to twist...really an int...pleasure and pain do tend to twist...really an interesting piece...and sometimes it is good when you can clear your mind, to get some sleep...what an intriguing twist of emotion in this...but true gwen.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com