tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post7006712814723423596..comments2024-03-01T03:13:20.172-05:00Comments on Poetic Notions: Candle Gwen Dubeauhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02762368919548287749noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-10422096917541708532013-01-30T02:44:07.692-05:002013-01-30T02:44:07.692-05:00Lovely, so many contrasts, solitude with companion...Lovely, so many contrasts, solitude with companionship, stillness with movement, cold with warmth, a kaleidoscope of images and emotions, love it.Dorianna Ric (paintswithwords)https://www.blogger.com/profile/14784903538135226600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-47371100385066722802013-01-29T21:11:35.826-05:002013-01-29T21:11:35.826-05:00" Candle aglow upon the window.
The mantle c..." Candle aglow upon the window.<br /><br />The mantle clock ticks away the time.<br /><br />Tea is steeped, served hot and steamy. <br /><br />Puffs of snow adrift outside."<br /><br />The contrasts between outside and inside, cold vs. steamy. Something very warm, comforting and familiar in your word choice, this imagery. Liked this. Nicely done.Ginny Brannanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15298060016652737538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-60732115803360587862013-01-29T18:24:12.500-05:002013-01-29T18:24:12.500-05:00Although the mantle clock ticks away, I like how t...Although the mantle clock ticks away, I like how the candle marks the time too.<br /><br /> <a href="http://www.sewina.blogspot.co.uk/2013/01/like-modigliani.html" rel="nofollow">Mine’s HERE</a>Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-78580760188024308642013-01-29T16:16:55.944-05:002013-01-29T16:16:55.944-05:00cozy wintry night well described.
not alonecozy wintry night well described.<br /><br /><a href="http://zongrik.wordpress.com/2013/01/27/not-alone/" rel="nofollow">not alone</a>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-52018548476851984692013-01-29T15:39:02.909-05:002013-01-29T15:39:02.909-05:00A wonderful weave for a January evening...really e...A wonderful weave for a January evening...really enjoyed this Gwen...and love the bit of rhyme you weaved as well...clever poet :DTashtoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15847190224960829574noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-1987985703858785602013-01-29T11:39:27.899-05:002013-01-29T11:39:27.899-05:00smiles..a bit of magic in this..the candle light.....smiles..a bit of magic in this..the candle light...sharing the cheese with the mouse...the wish made long ago...has a bit of a fairy tale feel...nice..Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-10800205814469114562013-01-29T11:38:37.801-05:002013-01-29T11:38:37.801-05:00I enjoyed the many images in this poem, Gwen. They...I enjoyed the many images in this poem, Gwen. They all add up quite beautifully.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-53883320394283703012013-01-29T10:48:46.847-05:002013-01-29T10:48:46.847-05:00cant pull up soundcloud at work, so i will be back...cant pull up soundcloud at work, so i will be back here in a bit once i get home...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com