tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post795844843630537365..comments2024-03-01T03:13:20.172-05:00Comments on Poetic Notions: Desire Gwen Dubeauhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02762368919548287749noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-6464052796813462292012-09-27T10:45:26.186-04:002012-09-27T10:45:26.186-04:00<3<3<3<3<3<3Lucy Martinshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02148293327025601897noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-47266827222275958252012-09-26T10:51:28.748-04:002012-09-26T10:51:28.748-04:00Wanting the love and desire but afraid of the pain...Wanting the love and desire but afraid of the pain...nice write. ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-378279481298128672012-09-25T17:12:00.975-04:002012-09-25T17:12:00.975-04:00"Please tread lightly" I whisper,
on my ..."Please tread lightly" I whisper,<br />on my need to be your lover' - hope and promise - just taking that first step - xx Lib libithinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02804271915695515140noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-84113266837518721762012-09-25T16:31:12.625-04:002012-09-25T16:31:12.625-04:00smiles...nice....its a tentative thing...not wanti...smiles...nice....its a tentative thing...not wanting to be hurt...hoping they tread soft but the desire so strong...nice capture gwenBrian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-91557605809329861972012-09-25T16:08:27.360-04:002012-09-25T16:08:27.360-04:00Clever how the second line of each couplet contrad...Clever how the second line of each couplet contradicts and so builds up the storyJohn (@bookdreamer)https://www.blogger.com/profile/11576434749272275190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-29825076853903924342012-09-25T14:49:24.454-04:002012-09-25T14:49:24.454-04:00Its that moment when you want to let the guard dow...Its that moment when you want to let the guard down and you turn to trust. BeautifulBeth Winterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00123202473118521429noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-47944032513924944362012-09-25T14:43:10.783-04:002012-09-25T14:43:10.783-04:00sounds a bit like not sure which direction to take...sounds a bit like not sure which direction to take..the desire on one side to discover, then wanting to run...take your time i'd say if i were him...smilesClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com