tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post8544930703009163595..comments2024-03-01T03:13:20.172-05:00Comments on Poetic Notions: Iron CladGwen Dubeauhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02762368919548287749noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-41675571082709016302010-11-11T19:53:10.633-05:002010-11-11T19:53:10.633-05:00I love how the visual you used complimented your w...I love how the visual you used complimented your words.I always love to connect photos with words.<br /><br />I don't know if I'm taking the poem wrongly.But I feel it describes someone.A person who might seem over protective but someone you count on to.<br /><br />A beautifully written one shot!June_Butterflyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17400867257051822555noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-18007591774312402212010-11-10T14:57:44.900-05:002010-11-10T14:57:44.900-05:00Thank you very much Jingle Poetry and moondustwrit...Thank you very much Jingle Poetry and moondustwriter! I really appreciate the comments and for following my blog. :)Gwen Dubeauhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02762368919548287749noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-60479378670764699582010-11-10T01:31:26.959-05:002010-11-10T01:31:26.959-05:00I enjoy the personification of the steel. A knight...I enjoy the personification of the steel. A knight -like toughness that stands firm and protects<br /><br />Nicely wrought for One Shot<br /><br />Moon Smilesmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-61629821586297803352010-11-09T15:47:35.480-05:002010-11-09T15:47:35.480-05:00tough as steel,
cold as night,
better than steal,
...tough as steel,<br />cold as night,<br />better than steal,<br />shine bright...<br /><br />love your words, I added two lines to have fun.<br />super divine poetry.<br />Thanks for sharing.<br />xxAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-81236268221792874772010-11-08T22:05:51.542-05:002010-11-08T22:05:51.542-05:00Thank you both very much for your nice comments.
...Thank you both very much for your nice comments. <br />The gate is in a historical graveyard from the 1700-1800's, been around a long time and the way iron ages, yet lasts, fascinates me.Gwen Dubeauhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02762368919548287749noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-21836197264462750632010-11-07T17:39:43.569-05:002010-11-07T17:39:43.569-05:00I'm interested in the idea of watching an iron...I'm interested in the idea of watching an iron gate age. I assume that's over time, but it struck me as something that occurred almost while you watch in this poem.Marcus Goodyearhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07255781957722144278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6426129417773671245.post-36351312226872918812010-11-07T13:31:15.521-05:002010-11-07T13:31:15.521-05:00Perfect writing for the image, but going deeper, p...Perfect writing for the image, but going deeper, pecking at an undercurrent of life itself. Layers here, nicely done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com