Early bloom,
before its time.
Passing memory,
captured, moment gone by.
Tender thoughts,
a gentle touch.
Want to hold you,
be with you,
share so much.
Want to feel your love,
wash over me like rain.
Dance this dance,
hold my hand,
take a chance.
Walk into my world,
open your heart.
Create memories,
feel love and a fresh start.
In my mind, when I read it, it sounds like a beat poem . . .
ReplyDeleteLovely sense of hope in this piece for me--Lovely write!
ReplyDeletesmiles...read this earlier but word verification tripped me up...
ReplyDeletelove the love washing across like rain and the desire to walk hand in hand....and fresh starts are a beautiful thing...
So gently said, like the rain in your poem. Spring brings such hope and joy in beginnings. Your poem captures that spirit of the new birth arising.
ReplyDeleteI agree ... love the rhythm in this poem :) Lovely, beautiful images... purity and innocence ... nice :)
ReplyDeleteAwwww, very sweet poem and endearing too.
ReplyDeleteThe poem and the picture play off each other so well. Nicely done!
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