Eyes aglow,
they do show.
Life in color,
held and remembered.
Eyes aglow, once closed.
One person drifting,
among a sea of many.
Wandering the tides,
ebbing they rise,
smiling eyes held high.
Color so bright,
like red apples sliced.
Leaves of splender,
bring delight and wonder.
Even at night, still shining bright.
Imperfections add,
beauty to be had.
Sharp knife turns,
forever shrouded, I burn,
by the color of passion, so thick with fashion.
Deep blood runs, in veins to heart,
swept by color, never want it to stop.
Stoplight shines, no words, just action,
unknowingly, upon this fatal attraction.
Swept by color,
tickled by passion.
Stirring my love,
a hot, fiery reaction.
Heart aglow for this color,
forever taken and shaken,
by red envy, I know.

Swept by color,
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Stirring my love,
a hot, fiery reaction.
smiles...lots of passion in that line...and throughout this whole write...a passion for life...and imperfections do add...smiles.
Great rhythm and rhyme here. I like the idea of red envy.
ReplyDeleteVery good, passionate and cutting. I think first time I've read one of your poems, have seen your lovely photos. Thanks Gwen.
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Lovely --I agree with Laurie about the sense of rhythm--nice!
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ReplyDeleteNice one Gwen, saucy and salted, keep it up.
You certainly know how to reflect the passionate embrace of sensuality. Your poem draws us carefully into your world of deep embrace of the wonder that is in nature and in us.
ReplyDeleteWonderful Gwen....tickled my fanciful passion detector! I am with Brian on this one!
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